Post by Emberstar on May 4, 2012 8:06:38 GMT -6
In a large valley far away in the wilderness wolves roam. long ago their ancestors sliped through a pass that now only deer can access. for many years the wolves lived together peacfully. Not to lang after the wolves had grown to big to get out they began to fight. One stormy night they all gathered in the feild and were ready to fight. at the time there was only 20 wolves. before the battle started the two main leaders talked.
" There won't be enough food to feed us all during leaf-bare!" A huge black wolf howled "Half of us will starve! and its your fault!" he growled at the large sand colored wolf standing across from him "if you hadn't of brought us here then we would still be free instead of stuck in this valley!" he continued getting cheers from his supporters. The other wolf bowed his head "But if we hadn't come here we would of starved then too." he woofed evenly. "and if im correct you were one of the ones who agreed to coming here Shade," [/b]he added. Shade shook his head waiting for the thunder to pass "Well now i'm saying it's time for you to step down Talon, you can no longer be leader" he woofed Talon growled "and who are you to tell me that? and i supposed your going to be leader?" he barked at the dark wolf. Shade shook his head and stepped forward "don't make me kill my own brother," he woofed lunging, then the storm broke.
The battle raged for hours, finally the battle ended. The few survivors looked around the feild. It was soaked and stained red from blood and rain. One of the few wolves left from shades side padded to the center of the small group. "WE will end this battle here and now, anyone who belives we should leave this valley follow me. anyone else your on your own." he woofed then turned and headed towards the Darker woods that only Shade and his group had ever dared to set foot in its misty depths.
Generations later we came upon Thunder's pack. A dark forbidding hangs over the valley with it bringing the feeling of death and despair. Another battle will rage but will there be any survivors this time? Find out at Kingdom of the Blood Wolves
What you guys think?im not really trying to advertise i just want to know what you guys think about my storyline.
" There won't be enough food to feed us all during leaf-bare!" A huge black wolf howled "Half of us will starve! and its your fault!" he growled at the large sand colored wolf standing across from him "if you hadn't of brought us here then we would still be free instead of stuck in this valley!" he continued getting cheers from his supporters. The other wolf bowed his head "But if we hadn't come here we would of starved then too." he woofed evenly. "and if im correct you were one of the ones who agreed to coming here Shade," [/b]he added. Shade shook his head waiting for the thunder to pass "Well now i'm saying it's time for you to step down Talon, you can no longer be leader" he woofed Talon growled "and who are you to tell me that? and i supposed your going to be leader?" he barked at the dark wolf. Shade shook his head and stepped forward "don't make me kill my own brother," he woofed lunging, then the storm broke.
The battle raged for hours, finally the battle ended. The few survivors looked around the feild. It was soaked and stained red from blood and rain. One of the few wolves left from shades side padded to the center of the small group. "WE will end this battle here and now, anyone who belives we should leave this valley follow me. anyone else your on your own." he woofed then turned and headed towards the Darker woods that only Shade and his group had ever dared to set foot in its misty depths.
Generations later we came upon Thunder's pack. A dark forbidding hangs over the valley with it bringing the feeling of death and despair. Another battle will rage but will there be any survivors this time? Find out at Kingdom of the Blood Wolves
What you guys think?im not really trying to advertise i just want to know what you guys think about my storyline.